Trained to fight, yet born to die. Hope; it bears little meaning for we who shy from the sun; society Cursed bodies, consumed by Thorn Disposable tools, faulted products of man’s own greed and poisoned ambition. Even life past the cages pales, is worthless for want of more than a limited life So now we fight to find the solution to glorify friends who were trained to fight yet born to die but shan’t have passed; in vain. The Schiff |
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Wow.
This will be the first time that I've ever tried freeverse poetry. And I think it turned out okay- for a first try, anyways. It's little more than prose crammed into a more poem-like format, but isn't that pretty much what freeverse is? I'm not really going to bother explaining the Schiff to people who don't know what they are- it's difficult to explain, and if you ever intend to watch Blood+, it kinda takes away from the mystery of them~ I'm not particularly looking for a critique, but if you feel you must, go ahead. The Schiff are © to... err... someone who isn't me. Or you. As a side note, something is screwy with text uploads... |
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Needs to protect himself against his tendency to be too trusting, as he finds it is liable to be misunderstood or exploited by others. As a result, he adopts a critical and stand-offish attitude, participating only when assured of success.
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Most people are like slinkys, not good for anythig, but still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs
Mama Dahmer: Jeffery I don't like your friends
Jeffery Dahmer: Then eat the vegtables
I think it's good~ atlest you can write something like this. D: -fails epicly-
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Avvie by RikuLuver360 <3
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"When you sleep, your body marks the time. Yesterday dies in the dark; tomorrow wakes. Eyes open, you know. The body ages, the hourglass empties, death approaches, time is devoured but not lost."
Excerpt from "Skinned" by Robin Wasserman
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Everybody knows- everybody knows;
That you cradle the sun,
Living in remorse,
Sky is over
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"When you sleep, your body marks the time. Yesterday dies in the dark; tomorrow wakes. Eyes open, you know. The body ages, the hourglass empties, death approaches, time is devoured but not lost."
Excerpt from "Skinned" by Robin Wasserman
And thank-you~
I bet you could write something like this if you tried XD
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Everybody knows- everybody knows;
That you cradle the sun,
Living in remorse,
Sky is over
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Everybody knows- everybody knows;
That you cradle the sun,
Living in remorse,
Sky is over
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